AHhhhhhh, there's something really crushing about the expression on her face in this version, and the composition and the way the figure lightens out... and the texture is just amazing, gosh, I adore it.
For perspective, I think her thighs/legs are still too large. They are almost as wide as her shoulders, so shrink them some for such a dramatic shot, I think just the slightest change could help!
For perspective, I think her thighs/legs are still too large. They are almost as wide as her shoulders, so shrink them some for such a dramatic shot, I think just the slightest change could help!